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Hi all! I've been writing a bit lately, and, well, came up with this very short three paragraphs of questionable content purely because I was curious about how I would write stuff like this, having read so much of the same content before ^.^
Go ahead and read it, let me know how you feel about these three paragraphs! :) I promise, this is rated NC16 and nothing else. Enjoy!
Note: I OWN THIS. I spent 2 weeks writing this, trying to make it as good as I could for my first try. If you actually think this is good and wanna use it for whatever purposes, I'm flattered, I'm touched, go ahead with my full blessings, but ASK FOR MY PERMISSION FIRST. This is basic manners, and like every other writer in the world, I am fiercely protective of my works. If anyone dares to use this without asking me first, I will raise such a hellish ruckus that will be IMPOSSIBLE TO IGNORE. Just so you know.
:)
"As their lips locked, he felt a strange, fierce rush of pleasure, and an unstoppable urge to claim her as his own. Twisting his hands into her hair, he pushed her hard against the brick wall, pinning her there with his weight. Her mouth opened ever so slightly in a gasp of surprise, and that was all the invitation he needed. As his tongue snaked past her lips, it met with hers, and she abruptly pulled away. He pulled away from her for a moment, yet still trapping her between him and the wall behind her.
'Come out and play, little mouse,' he murmured as he stared hungrily into her eyes of hazel. Ever so gently, he pulled her closer to him, deliberately hesitating for just a fraction of a second before their mouths met again, and she willingly let him in this time without needing any urging from him. It was clear to him that she had no idea how to act, and she was nervous. Luckily, he was a patient teacher. A very patient one at that. He teased, caressed and guided her before she felt confident enough to engage in the battle of dominance with him. Undoubtedly, he won.
Sucking on her lower lip, he felt that fierce pleasure again as she groaned quietly, her breathing ragged. Letting go of her lip, his tongue traced a line along her jaw and down her neck. She tilted her head up, submitting to him. Her lips curved in a lazy smile – he was in control and knowing that, she was more than happy to let him dominate. Tilting her head to his left, his mouth paused at her racing pulse before he slowly licked her jugular. Her shuddering breath of pleasure only served to tell him how much she wanted more as her arms, draped around his neck, tightened and pulled him closer to her."
Go ahead and read it, let me know how you feel about these three paragraphs! :) I promise, this is rated NC16 and nothing else. Enjoy!
Note: I OWN THIS. I spent 2 weeks writing this, trying to make it as good as I could for my first try. If you actually think this is good and wanna use it for whatever purposes, I'm flattered, I'm touched, go ahead with my full blessings, but ASK FOR MY PERMISSION FIRST. This is basic manners, and like every other writer in the world, I am fiercely protective of my works. If anyone dares to use this without asking me first, I will raise such a hellish ruckus that will be IMPOSSIBLE TO IGNORE. Just so you know.
:)
"As their lips locked, he felt a strange, fierce rush of pleasure, and an unstoppable urge to claim her as his own. Twisting his hands into her hair, he pushed her hard against the brick wall, pinning her there with his weight. Her mouth opened ever so slightly in a gasp of surprise, and that was all the invitation he needed. As his tongue snaked past her lips, it met with hers, and she abruptly pulled away. He pulled away from her for a moment, yet still trapping her between him and the wall behind her.
'Come out and play, little mouse,' he murmured as he stared hungrily into her eyes of hazel. Ever so gently, he pulled her closer to him, deliberately hesitating for just a fraction of a second before their mouths met again, and she willingly let him in this time without needing any urging from him. It was clear to him that she had no idea how to act, and she was nervous. Luckily, he was a patient teacher. A very patient one at that. He teased, caressed and guided her before she felt confident enough to engage in the battle of dominance with him. Undoubtedly, he won.
Sucking on her lower lip, he felt that fierce pleasure again as she groaned quietly, her breathing ragged. Letting go of her lip, his tongue traced a line along her jaw and down her neck. She tilted her head up, submitting to him. Her lips curved in a lazy smile – he was in control and knowing that, she was more than happy to let him dominate. Tilting her head to his left, his mouth paused at her racing pulse before he slowly licked her jugular. Her shuddering breath of pleasure only served to tell him how much she wanted more as her arms, draped around his neck, tightened and pulled him closer to her."
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